It was a pleasure to read these contributions. In general, the group managed the layering task very well, integrating a lot of sensorial detail and achieving " an accurate description of the environment which allows the reader to see, hear and smell the place as if he or she were there." I've made some general comments - remember that for the final written piece, you'll be able to do this in two steps - a first draft, followed by feedback which will allow you to submit a final draft. More about this on Wed Feb 21 in class ....
